The Official Writing Challenge
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Good pov here. Truly all sin stems from selfishness. Every child needs to learn this. Maybe this story will help.
I like the way you have used a character from another land and I like the storyline. I can visualize the pictures in my mind as I read this. Descriptive and well done. God bless your gift.Janice