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I think you captured the family's love from sister to mother of a soldier's life. Vietnam was a war where so many were lost and I can feel your mother's fear and love and fervent prayers.
Your article is very relevant for the time. Well written and easy to read. Keep up the good work. P.K. Roberts
05/06/05
Beautiful and touching. One could feel the love and concern of your mother and yourself for your brother. Thank God he did arrive safely.
You've poured your heart into this piece. Good job.
02/21/08
Your story is a testimony of answered prayer--thank God!
It reads like a Christmas movie...I'm just curious--how did your brother react?