The Official Writing Challenge
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Scary that this could be true. I can only hope that, since you need to keep your cover, that this is fiction or ghostwritten.

Definately held my attention.
06/02/07
Lots of excitement here!

Reads more like a narrative summary of a larger work--if you come back to this, consider writing it more in story form, with your narrator interacting with the extremists in dialogue and action.

May God be with our nation in these difficult times!
06/02/07
This is a very sobering story that is in tune with our precarious political situation today. You definitely gave your piece a note of realism in the way you presented it. I noticed a couple verb tense shifts and small "mechanical" errors that proofreading should catch. You closed this story with a good warning message. Nice job! :)
Wow. I sure hope this is NOT true! It was a little technical for me but really got my attention when you mentioned churches I am familiar with. Good job.
Sobering story here. We know not yet what we face in the future.
06/06/07
Definately spell binding action. Like the others that left comments I hope this isn't true. It is however believable and as such a scary story with only a happy ending for now and the promise of a sequel. You are either a master story teller or the host of the "Gong Show." Good job!