The Official Writing Challenge
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05/02/05
You captured the true meaning of Christmas. Well done.
I thought this would make a wonderful poem to read on Christmas Eve with young children. You put the story so simple into a way that children would understand too.
This is a wonderful poem. I am always amazed with the flow of words for poets. This peice can be used to bless in many settings. Thanks for your submission. Don't change a thing. P.K.
05/03/05
Very good, it is as though it flowed without trying to get the words to rhyme they just did. Good Job!
05/09/05
Hi Carol. I just wanted to take a moment to let you know that your entry was one of seven in the semi-finals for the Level 1 Challenge. Keep rising to the Challenge - you're on the right track. With love, Deb
05/09/05
Oops! I keep forgetting to say that I'm the Challenge Coordinator. So hope knowing that you did very well is an encouragement to you. With love (again) Deb (Challenge Coordinator)