The Official Writing Challenge
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I think the problem you touched on wonderfully here is that we find ourselves lost in the cynical message now being plastered on bill boards. But I kept hoping I would see here how you turned it around, how you found a way to give back that went beyond all of this. But maybe it's good you didn't for that would have been the easier read. As it was, I had to deal with my own life and thoughts, was I doing the same thing? This way you left the reader with a chance to examine many things in their own lives. So I think I kinda of like the way you ended it!
05/03/05
I could understand your sentiment, but it was not an easy read. It went from an article to prose then back to an article. The sad part is to many times even as believer's we allow the cynicism of the world to get in us and not the other way around.