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One of the thoughts that ran through my head as I read this, was that we always think someone "else has it better" without admitting that we know nothing of their pain. Friendship crosses all boundaries flashed in my head too. I thought you made these Characters real and gave them a heart that was felt. I was happy that ending showed them finding their friendship once again. Good messages all the way through here and some are painful as we have to wonder, "who did we pass up in life" because we felt they were too "different?"
The idea for this article is very good. The transparency of your heart is felt. However, the presentation of the facts did not flow very well. It was an easy difficult read. Work on the flow of transitions. Look forward to reading your next article. P.K.
I enjoyed reading your article. It reminded me of Christmas' past when I was the kid who didn't get as much as others and the confused feelings I had.