The Official Writing Challenge
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06/02/07
This reads almost like the sort of tale that would be told around a campfire.

Another approach would be to "freshen up" the familiar story by adding action and dialogue in addition to the narration.

Definitely an adventure, that's for sure!
06/03/07
My pastor has been preaching on this time period of the Bible at my church. What a great story. I would have liked less "facts" and more about what the writer was feeling...his emotions, etc. More details that we don't already know from the Bible would be very interesting. Thanks.