The Official Writing Challenge
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06/02/07
This reads almost like the sort of tale that would be told around a campfire.

Another approach would be to "freshen up" the familiar story by adding action and dialogue in addition to the narration.

Definitely an adventure, that's for sure!
My pastor has been preaching on this time period of the Bible at my church. What a great story. I would have liked less "facts" and more about what the writer was feeling...his emotions, etc. More details that we don't already know from the Bible would be very interesting. Thanks.