The Official Writing Challenge
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I am sitting here just starting to read, and I am just amazed today at the high quality of story telling in the beginning level! The reader hear felt the love of this child and wondered for a moment what she did, but it was just a glimmer as the story quickly picked of the heart of that morning. The ending was just beautiful. Thank you for such a loving read.
Very beautiful and touching.
Very well done. I liked it alot, if it is a true story even more so.
I enjoyed reading this article. I was brought into it and felt the little girl's pain and the love that her father had for her.
Tammy, congratulations on your 3rd Place in the Level 1 Challenge. The ratings for all the semi-finalists this week were very close, and even though you didn't quite make it into the Editors' Choice, you still did extremely well. You could move up to Level 2 now if you feel ready for it. I think you are. With love, Deb
A wonderful story! You had me hooked and I loved the conclusion. Congratulations on a well deserved win! :)
Well written and heart warming story.

I was so touched by your just moved me and held my attention all the way through it. Congratulations and keep writing....this was heartwarming.