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05/31/07
I enjoyed the surprise ending. Great job.
05/31/07
This story made me laugh! Great ending, loved it.
I really enjoyed this. In his old age Mr. Jones' youthful imagination was restored to him.
06/02/07
Fun and unexpected ending!
As a dog lover, I loved this story. The ending was great. (I was so glad the dog didn't get attacked by the cougar.)
06/05/07
This is exceptionally well written, beyond level 1, in my opinion. Unlike the other comments, I sense a tragedy in the narrator's past that prompts him to relive the experience in his declining years. Sam is alive, again, in his mind, which is a comfort to the old man, but his crying out to Sam makes me think Sam's charging the cougar also meant his end. At any rate, this is a fine story and I relish the clever twist at the end.
06/05/07
Good article.
Good job!I like this. Well done. Comical and imginative. Keep on writing, this is great.:0)Janice
Comical somtimes how the elderly can find adventure in the hallway while riding in a wheelchair. Sometimes I think it's God's way of keeping them excited and active. Enjoyed this.