The Official Writing Challenge
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Wonderful concept of the walls that separate us from God. I know it was for the purpose of rhyme, but "God and I" should be "God and me". Maybe a little rewording? The thought is still well presented here.
05/25/07
I liked this poem and its main idea was well described. This was well written, and a reminder to us all to cast out whatever stands in the way of complete devotion to our Lord
05/25/07
Love the message here. Great job. Visuals are terrific.