The Official Writing Challenge
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05/24/07
I like this. I read easily and rhymically. Good work.
05/25/07
A very nice poem with very pleasant scenes and sentiments
05/26/07
"...Picnic blankets splashed across meadows
A bit of shade, under the weeping willows

Brilliant blooms to create rainbows of color
Amidst the lush carpet of green grass and clover
Eagles will fly high and dance on the wind
And I'll love this time to share with my friend...."
My favorite lines, these paint such an inviting picture. Just lovely!
Beautiful poem of expectation.