The Official Writing Challenge
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This captured the emotions well of somebody who feels abandonded by God. I can certainly relate.
This is my favorite line: "Oh, take this cup from me, I canít bear it, I canít!"
Very nicely done.
05/25/07
This is so beautifully written, and the hurting heart is so well portrayed here. How I long to put my arms around this soul. Well done
05/26/07
Great job. Love the thoughts.
Great encouraging thought in poetic form.
The emotion is there. The struggle is there. The answer is there. Well done!
I wondered those same questions and thoughts so many times before.
05/29/07
What a moving poem on the journey from desperation to hope. Certainly puts it in perspective, doesn't it? Very nice job!
05/29/07
THIS was a blessing. I REALLY enjoyed reading this.

Great flow, great structure. I do believe there is some talent hidden between these lines.

A Very. Very Good Job.
05/31/07
You touched my heart and soul...I have been there many times! Love your style!
05/31/07
I enjoyed this and can certainly relate to the emotions being expressed. It was gripping throughout with an uplifting ending. I felt the despair and the crying out and the peace. Nicely done.
I love this. So many of us can relate to this going through daily events and struggles. God bless your gift and keep writing from the heart, it will take you places only God can direct. Beautiful, just amazingly beautiful!Janice