The Official Writing Challenge
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{{{HUGS}}} Wow! I held out hope until the end that the son was away, perhaps in the military, and cried when I realized what I thought was true, was.
05/25/07
Your poem touched me. I lost a loved one too soon also, and I know this kind of yearning so well. The hope of Heaven is a great gift, isn't it?
05/25/07
Very nice! If only we could send a text message to heavenly relatives or loved ones! I'd be texting all day!
05/26/07
So heartfelt and aching. Well done.
This moved me to tears, wonderful piece.
Heartbreaking. Certainly different.
05/28/07
A very contemporary poem. Wonderful.
05/29/07
Your sorrow is apparent, you did a good job of expressing the feeling in this poem... well written!!!