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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Write in the POETRY genre (05/17/07)

TITLE: Therefore Choose Life
By Janice Cartwright
05/21/07


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“I call heaven and earth to record this day against you, that I have set before you life and death,

BLESSING:

(Oh, the buzzin’ of the bee and the flutter at the bath
And the shadow of the tree in the twist of the path

The bunny in the brush and the babe to the breast
And the dart and the glide of the swallow to the nest

The wave of the heat and the blanket of the flower
And a monk of the hood and a summer-day shower

The strength of the sun and the mellow of the moon
And the deep of the grass and the laze of the noon

The furrows in the rows and the dipper at the well
And the ripe of the grape and the filling of the pail

The snip of the shears and the wine on the lees
And the cellar of the salt and the nod to the breeze

The army of the ants in their stomp in their pomp
And the haze of the light off the dew and the damp

The rushing of the tide and the piper in a race
And the swell of the earth as it hangs out in space

The sapphire of the sea and the golden of the clay
And evening’s slanted ray and the new of the day)

and CURSING:

(Or, the sting of the bee and the drowning at the bath
And the felling of the tree and the stone in the path

The skinny of the bunny and the droop of the breast
And the dart through the heart of the hen on her nest

The scorch of the heat and the wilt of the bloom
The blister of the sun and the hollow of the moon

The steel to the throat and the wall of the wail
And brown of the crop and the empty dinner pail

The heaven that is brass and the earth that is iron
And the rot in the plum and the wither on the vine

The stench of the storm from the corpse where it fell
And the wine into water but no water in the well

The battle of the beasts and the bedlam of the ant
And the shade of the light in the dim of the lamp

The quake of the earth and the drought and the flood
And the horse and its bridle for the depth of the blood

The pouring of the plague on the jackal-desert waste
And the shudder of the orb as it swerves from its place)

therefore choose life, that both thou and thy seed may live:” Deuteronomy 30:19


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Jan Ackerson 05/24/07
This poem totally blows me away. I haven't read many yet, but I can't imagine that any other poem on any level will be better than this one. Outstanding!
Teri Wilson05/24/07
This is unreal. The imagery and figurative language in this piece just blows me away. I LOVE it!!!!!! Congratulations on a job VERY well done. A lovely look at the subtle beauty of all of the Lord's blessings. Blessings, Teri
Helen Paynter05/24/07
Wow, this is seriously good. You are in the wrong level, my friend! Total mastery of meter, rhythm, rhyme - and your words - the stomp and the pomp - I say again, wow!
Rita Garcia05/24/07
This reads as if your picked up a brush and with each stroke your words painted a picture of His love! Keep writing for His glory!
Marilee Alvey05/24/07
Wonderful poem! It shows us two ways of looking at the same thing. I know people in both groups. I choose to spend time with the first group. In the beginning, it seemed to start off like "The Big Rock Candy Mountain." 'Oh, the buzzin' of the bees and the peppermint trees...' It was soothing, like that, too. I look forward to reading more of your writings as you climb through the ranks! Congratulations!
Pat Guy 05/24/07
I'm about speechless ... I could hear this being preformed by the one who does, "That's My King ... Do You Know Him?'

Just absolutely awesome. My oh my ...
Cassie Memmer05/24/07
Beautiful! So well put together, created. Excellent!
Julie Arduini05/24/07
Inspiring, wonderful, amazing. You nailed this genre but good!
Benjamin Graber05/24/07
Great poem, both creative and inspiring!
Jacquelyn Horne05/24/07
Very informative poem, making the choices stand out. I like the way you separtated the scripture. It has an impact that way.
Rhonda Clark 05/24/07
This is really cool. Love how you look at both sides.
Dara Sorensen05/24/07
Awesome! I love the rhythm of the poem--very good! I also like how you showed both sides too. ^_^
Dixie Phillips 05/24/07
Very creative and just adore the contrast!
Dee Yoder 05/25/07
Beautiful! This poem is simply wonderful to read. I love every line.
Lynda Lee Schab 05/25/07
This piece is absolutely brilliant. Beautifully written, wonderful rhyme and meter. You may be in the Beginner level but you're no beginner poet! Simply superb.
Donna Emery05/25/07
Wow! The contrast and the flow of this poem are amazing. Well done!
Sara Harricharan 05/25/07
Very nice. I too, love the contrasting descriptions. Excellent job here and good rhyming meter.
Vickie Thomas05/25/07
Wow!!!!! What an awesome job you did. Great work.
Verna Cole Mitchell 05/25/07
What a stupendous poem...wish I'd written it...truly masterful!
Colin Swann05/26/07
WOW! WOW! WOW! BRILL!


   
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