The Official Writing Challenge
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Glorious account of the resurrection.
very nice account of the familiar resurrection story.
Quite unique. Never heard the resurrection story told like this before. Narrative poetry is quite a challenge, especially if you use rhyme. Good effort.
Interesting use of lower case. The scant use of punctuation seemed to work well, too.
Great thoughts about the resurrection. Good work.
Very nice! I love the line, 'hope is not lost.' This paints a clear picture as you walk us through the events. Good job!
Very impressive. Loved it! A couple of helpful hints - the second verse..."awakened" or "awoke" would have done better than your "awoken"...and lie and lay in the end needs a little fixing - but otherwise, Kevin, this is a terrific piece of work. Keep up the good work! "Go to Intermediate Level - do not pass Go!" (talk to you in the USA/AL thread on the Boards) Great Job here!