The Official Writing Challenge
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Glorious account of the resurrection.
05/25/07
very nice account of the familiar resurrection story.
05/26/07
Quite unique. Never heard the resurrection story told like this before. Narrative poetry is quite a challenge, especially if you use rhyme. Good effort.
Interesting use of lower case. The scant use of punctuation seemed to work well, too.
05/27/07
Great thoughts about the resurrection. Good work.
05/28/07
Very nice! I love the line, 'hope is not lost.' This paints a clear picture as you walk us through the events. Good job!
06/23/07
Very impressive. Loved it! A couple of helpful hints - the second verse..."awakened" or "awoke" would have done better than your "awoken"...and lie and lay in the end needs a little fixing - but otherwise, Kevin, this is a terrific piece of work. Keep up the good work! "Go to Intermediate Level - do not pass Go!" (talk to you in the USA/AL thread on the Boards) Great Job here!