The Official Writing Challenge
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A minor typo, matte s/b matter. Great thoughts. This could be given to a counselor to share with counselees in dispair.
Wonderful poem of compassion. The "your" in the fifth stanza should be you're (probably an oversight). But this poem shows a great love for your fellow man.
05/25/07
Very nice! I could easily see this being used in a devotional.
05/25/07
Nice poem. For me, the flow started out great, but lost something. I like the subjet matter.
05/25/07
I like the thoughts behind this poem. Nicely done.
05/31/07
Truly a heart for the hurting! Wonderful poem!