The Official Writing Challenge
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Awesome! Sad. True. Honest. Hopefilled. Well told.

This could actually be made into a booklet for youth groups to remind them of the potential results of bad decisions.
This is a very well-told story. One line, however needs help. "When your bodies in it's grave." This should read "body's" (body is) and "its" which is the possessive form of it. "It's" means it is.

But this is easily corrected and the story flows on beautifully.
05/26/07
I absolutely love this. You told Schnell's story so very well. Great work.
05/27/07
Very nicely flowing, and a very nice story
A well-told tale and tribute to your friend and to God's faithfulness.
A journey through life well-told. Your poem inspires and gives hope to those with similar yokes. God has to be smiling down on this one!
05/30/07
Enjoyed this on sooo many levels! Thanks for sharing!
05/30/07
This is excellent - such a poignant message poignantly told.
06/01/07
Great job to a life changing story. Well on your way to your portfolio.

God Bless and keep writing.
Oh, I love this. Though some of the lines need a little reowrking here and there all in all this is a gem and I will put it my treasure box of poetry I love to read. Just beautiful and the message touched me so much! Wow. Thank you. great message indeed.God bless your writing.Keep it up.Janice