The Official Writing Challenge
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Nice Read. Moving.
05/24/07
Great poem. The emotion in this is very strong.
05/27/07
Wow, this is wonderful. The words are descriptive and it evokes a restlessness that embodies the wind. Good job
He can certainly calm the storm within. How true.
05/30/07
I like your comparisons between storms of weather and storms of heart! My favorite part was your ending--

"The creator and guide of me
Who gives guidance and directs
Not only the storms in this world
But also the storms of this life
The storms inside me
To change even the most fierce storm
Into the calm and peace of sure deliverance
In this I will rest"

Thank you for sharing this! :)