The Official Writing Challenge
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05/24/07
I love this. I grew up picking blackberries and eating them right from the vine. You brought back great memories.

Except the thorns. Been stuck way too many times.
05/25/07
A great picture of summer. I enjoyed reading this poem very much.
I like this alot. Vivid descriptions brought me back to our field behind my mom's house when I was small and the berries of summer were like little treaures sent from heaven, even with the thorns and stickers,grin. Great job! Keep up the writing, this is enjoyable!God bless you. Janice
05/27/07
A lovely description that makes it easy to imagine its setting. Nicely done
Emily, this is beautiful. I was imagining the sights and smells as I read. I also like the comments at the end. Thanks for comments on "Poor Me...Dave