The Official Writing Challenge
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05/17/07
This is nicely written, with good description and concept.
05/19/07
I liked this piece, we learned alot about the POV charecter in such a short time. The description was very good as well.

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mAndy
Very good. Well written.
05/21/07
Wow this was a really good story, I was throughly entertained. Keep up the good work!
Excellent characterization and a fresh approach to science fiction, which normally, even if subtly, tends to dethrone the Genesis account of creation. Your story is my favorite for this level.