The Official Writing Challenge
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05/02/05
What a beautiful read as I could just see so many things through your eyes.
05/02/05
Very well done! Can visualize myself with you at Mass. Title does not do it justice for me.
Keep up the good work.

P.K. Roberts
05/04/05
I have never been to mass, but it sounds absolutely lovely. Makes me want to be there.
05/06/05
Ah ... very nice Penny! This reads so beautifully! Why are you in level 1 again? :-)
05/06/05
Penny, I love your poem. You tell of a wonderful place to be and describe it so well. I enjoyed midnight mass, with the children home sleeping soundly,grandparents watching over them, but it's crisp and cold and bells are ringing..great imagery.
05/08/05
You sure don't write like a beginner to me. Great job!
05/10/05
A lovely read, Penny. A special reminder of those moments, few and far between that couples must grasp and treasure. Loved 'boyfriend and girlfriend'.