The Official Writing Challenge
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What a beautiful read as I could just see so many things through your eyes.
Very well done! Can visualize myself with you at Mass. Title does not do it justice for me.
Keep up the good work.

P.K. Roberts
I have never been to mass, but it sounds absolutely lovely. Makes me want to be there.
05/06/05
Ah ... very nice Penny! This reads so beautifully! Why are you in level 1 again? :-)
Penny, I love your poem. You tell of a wonderful place to be and describe it so well. I enjoyed midnight mass, with the children home sleeping soundly,grandparents watching over them, but it's crisp and cold and bells are ringing..great imagery.
You sure don't write like a beginner to me. Great job!
05/10/05
A lovely read, Penny. A special reminder of those moments, few and far between that couples must grasp and treasure. Loved 'boyfriend and girlfriend'.