The Official Writing Challenge
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05/17/07
Well written, a great moral added to the prose. I liked this.
05/22/07
Wow! I wouldn't want to live on this planet! Too dangerous! :) This was a fun piece with a good message! I think it would make a great children's story with pictures of the creatures with antennas and four purple hands! :)
This definitely was a fun read. Lots of good description. And the message did come through, loud and clear...and I don't even have antennas. This could easily be developed into a children's story. Good job.
05/23/07
Cute and clever. Enjoyed this!
I have to echo what others have said about this making a great childrens' story. It has a powerful lesson, but at the same time, I think the subtle humor would appeal to kids.
Just a couple of minor punctuation issues, but overall, this was very good.
05/23/07
wow! Am I ever glad I'm not from Pluto!! I could see the story book pages flipping as I read this, especially the 4 purple fingers. Good job!
05/23/07
Excuse while I repent for envy. Very nice job. God bless.