The Official Writing Challenge
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05/20/07
Creative! Like your last line especially. A good lesson for us all.
I enjoyed this story. You need to watch the use of "than" when you mean "then". But still a very good piece. I especially liked, "I knew that I could continue questioning things I was'nt (should be wasn't) supposed to know the answer for, or I could trust the results and God’s timing." Good point.
Very nice! I like your points and arguments! I like time travel a lot. :D