The Official Writing Challenge
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WOW! Really liked it. Of course, I agree with the premise, but also enjoyed the story around it and your descriptions. Good science mingled with the fiction. Well done.
This is well written.
05/22/07
Great story -- your title got my attention. I especially loved the Global Warming Taliban.

You have some very long sentences that could be helped with additional punctuation and/or splitting. (I only see this because I'm guilty of writing in the same long-sentence style.) I think it would read smoother with some of those sentences broken up.

Very creative storyline, and kept me reading and interested.
Thanks for teh kind comments, tell the judges for me...

I agree about the long sentances, but they flow in a conversational sort of way.