The Official Writing Challenge
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05/18/07
good job!
05/23/07
Very interesting but sad story! You clearly show what happens when we forget God and His truths and His ways. I liked the part where God told number 757 that even though his body was "factory-made," He is the only maker and giver of our souls! :)
05/25/07
To God be all glories for the story. :)