The Official Writing Challenge
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Very Good. I'm amazed at the science fiction this week! Each day would have read easier with a little separation of paragraphs and quotes. But otherwise, very well written.
This was really cool. I loved the story and how you tied it together.
05/23/07
This is very good! I do agree that some extra spaces would make for easier reading, but I see a novel in the workings here! This reminds me of a saga that can span lifetimes. Thanks for sharing! ^_^
05/25/07
I like this story. I like the way you talk about how the entire population of another planet comes to know God. :)