The Official Writing Challenge
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This is very well written. You have a way with words. I didn't quite understand the ending. Were they safe? Were they on a space ship leaving earth for good? I guess I'll just have to guess. But it is a very good story and the colorful writing is a joy to read.
You grabbed my attention from the beginning and kept it to end. Well done!
05/21/07
WOW! A gifted writer! Enjoyed reading this.
05/22/07
Ooooooooooh, this is very suspenseful and well-written! You use several excellent descriptive words and phrases that make the scenes come alive! Great job! :)
05/23/07
I was captivated from the very first sentence to the last! Great writing! I look forward to reading more of your work.
05/25/07
Good writing, gripping suspense. I liked the twist of the night goggles. Will look forward to seeing more from you.