The Official Writing Challenge
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05/18/07
I really liked this story and how you brought it to life. Well done!
05/18/07
Let's pray that this science fiction comes true and there is hope beyond hope. Some left behind could then have a chance. Good thought.
05/22/07
Very creative and interesting story! I would, however, suggest that you space between paragraphs for easier reading. I like the message of hope in this piece! :)
05/27/07
welcome to faithwriters.
I enjoyed your first artical keep up the good writing.