The Official Writing Challenge
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05/18/07
Very interesting, poetic piece with a great message! I liked your descriptive words and vivid imagery, and the last stanza was excellent! Good job! :)
05/24/07
The title caught my attention, having a poetic/musical bent myself. Very innovative, combining Sci Fi with poetry. Lavish, colourful paint-strokes used to create an abstract picture. I'm inclined to think that most readers will get a bit lost in it after a while, and want to get off the ride you're taking them on. I rather liked it though.