The Official Writing Challenge
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Certainly different. I like the way you wove prayer into the conflict.
05/18/07
Interesting story. It reminded me of Frank Peretti's THIS PRESENT DARKNESS
05/21/07
*chills* I loved how you worked the horror of hell into the very beginning and then the prayer needed for successful spiritual warfare. It would've been interesting to hear some dialog between the men about the discovery. Good descriptions! --good job! :-)
I enjoyed this story! Spine tingling!
05/23/07
Chill-giving...OH sooo well written. Really enjoyed reading this!
Your title was right-on target, and your story was very interesting.
05/23/07
What an imaginative and exciting story--albeit a bit gruesome! :) You kept my attention all the way through to the thrilling end! Good descriptions!
05/23/07
Definitely shadows of Peretti - this felt so real. You captivated me.
Naye, this is very well done. The descriptions and the suspense are top notch. I really love the last two sentences. Both thumbs up.
05/23/07
Some very nice work. Enjoyed it. God bless.