The Official Writing Challenge
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05/11/07
This is very nice! You paint a clear picture in just a few words. Nice work
The writing here is good. It is a little short, but a lot of info is packed in here.
05/16/07
This seemed like a real letter, except for the governance system part ... that seemed forced. But I could see someone wanting to share those events.
05/17/07
Covered a lot in a few words here! Would love more detail, and a bit of focus on punctuation, but a good piece.