The Official Writing Challenge
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Sounds like this entry should have been put in the advanced section. Really well written, writer obviously researched the subject! Great Job!
05/11/07
As a Jewish believer, your title drew me in - but the story kept me riveted. I was curious where you were going with the first part - and I LOVED what you did with it! Lovely.
05/11/07
wow! I loved the connection here and what a wonderful story. Very good writing. I expect to see you move up to the next level soon!
05/11/07
Very nice piece connecting an ancient Old Testament family with a modern New Testament one by showing how their family devotional practices were different but similar.

I think you meant "piqued" instead of "peeked" in one place, and it would have helped to have the stories put in paragraphs for easier reading with extra space, asterisks, or something between the two accounts.

Very interesting and clever way of sharing these stories! :)
05/12/07
Oh, how wonderful!! The reading of the Shema gave me chills! I loved how you tied it together. Excellent. :-)