The Official Writing Challenge
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05/11/07
I could feel your love for both these men in every word. I enjoyed this very much. Nice job!
Your story held my interest all the way through. Colorful character, your father, but the smoking made my hair stand on end, lol. Found some grammatical errors, but with a careful revision this story should find a place in some publication. Nice work.