The Official Writing Challenge
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05/11/07
Very interesting and filled with vivid details. I could see the scene clearly. Good job
09/01/07
Oh, I love it, I love it, I love it. Such live descriptions. Wow. Great writing. And fancy finding you here :-). Write more, more, more - build up a collection of pieces like this to teach the rest of the world what life is like ... or, in this case, what life WAS like ... in other parts of the world. Seriously - you're GOOD.