The Official Writing Challenge
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05/10/07
Interesting and very absorbing. I think we all wonder what may have happened if we hadn't made our past choices. This was really interesting.
05/12/07
This is good! You pulled me in and I could feel the disappointment. You tied the story together nicely by returning to the present, too. Sometimes I wonder, too. Good job! :-)
05/15/07
Nicely done. I loved your comment about using the word "things" -- it made me chuckle out loud. That's something most of us remember hearing from at least one English teacher. Funny how that one sticks in our minds. :)
Thanks for sharing your thoughts. Your writing made it very interesting and the last paragraph brought it all together.