The Official Writing Challenge
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05/10/07
Very good poem and a graphic but good depiction of that wonderful day. I don't think you needed to capitalize the words "him", "his" and "he" but the poem was good and I look forward to reading more of your work.
05/11/07
Excellent. Greatly written.
I especially like the attention you gave HIM by exalting who HE is.
05/12/07
I loved the description here--it helped see Christ's suffering from a different angle. Very good! (to join the 'controversy': I thought having those words in all caps detracted from the overall scene, but I Definately would have capped the 'H' at the beginning of each of them!!) :-) :-) Once again, very good!!!
What a beautiful poem. I have no nits on this one. I hope and pray the powers that be notice this one.
God Bless
05/17/07
Excellent writing here, God truly blessed you as you wrote. This was very descriptive and I loved it.