The Official Writing Challenge
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05/10/07
This was well-written and powerful. I think you should turn this into a longer short story or a book even if it makes it in EC.
Frightening thought. I'm sure this was a terrible time for the victims of this war. This is well written.
Your descriptions are so vivid, I could feel the fear of this little family. I was pulled into the story by the first paragraph and it held my attention throughout.