The Official Writing Challenge
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05/10/07
Well-written. It might be a good idea to change some of your tenses. It would read a little easier if the whole thing was either present or past-tense. Good job.
Not knowing war terms, I was a little in a fog as to what happened here. The story was related well, I just didn't get it. However, I do know they won the battle.