The Official Writing Challenge
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05/10/07
This was a very challenging piece. It is so true that we must find time alone with God. I would suggest giving the beginning a once-over. There were words that are said twice and one preposition should probably be changed fro on to in. Other than that, well done. God bless you for your willingness to challenge us.
05/10/07
Hee, see, I make typing mistakes too. This article would make a good devotional piece, I'm thinking.
05/11/07
You express yourself clearly and with conviction. Nice job!
05/12/07
What a good reminder for us to make time, TAKE time to be alone with God. I agree with Holly, it's a good devotional piece. This was well thought out. Thank you!