The Official Writing Challenge
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05/03/07
I was highly entertained by the premise of this entry, and you have an engaging voice.

Be sure to capitalize the word "Bible" at all times.

Very apt object lesson, neatly written.
05/03/07
I like your conversational tone, and you segued nicely into the Biblical message, which was great! I like the "lifetime guarantee" from God. Definitely keep writing, you've got a way with words. :)
05/04/07
This is a great piece and a much needed reminder. Put together very well. I loved getting to know you and your family. Makes the reader feel good to think they've "met" you and have shared with you. And I like how you reached out to others. May God bless you and your future writings.
05/04/07
Practical, engaging and relevent. Great job!
05/08/07
Good comparison here. We should be prepared with God's Word. We should seek first the kingdom of God.