The Official Writing Challenge
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05/03/07
What a lot of research went into this entry! I so appreciate your meticulous study.

In a piece this short, such a large list of parenthetical references is a bit daunting. Consider choosing just a few references to expound on. To be honest, I glossed over all the references to get to the "meat."

Lots of great encouragement here!