The Official Writing Challenge
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05/03/07
I love your title, and your extremely empathetic piece, that will be of great comfort to women in a similar situation.

You switched tenses several times in the first few paragraphs; a little bit dizzying.

I loved the end--there's nothing like a tender, sensitive husband to move one to say "awwww." Very nice.
Such a heartwarming story. Well done. A winner in my book.