The Official Writing Challenge
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05/03/07
WOw, what an exciting story! How good God is, he is mighty to save, mighty to do miracles! Glory to GOd. ~Crystal~
05/06/07
I like the realism of the little girl's POV.

Work on keeping your piece all in the same tense.

An inspiring story of God's miraculous provision!
05/07/07
Wow -- a truly inspirational story that gave me goose bumps.