The Official Writing Challenge
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05/06/07
Isn't God's timing perfect?

A few suggestions: use parentheses ( ) instead of brackets { } or [ ], and hit an extra "enter" between paragraphs to create that blank space.

I love your last two sentences!
I loved the last two sentences as well. very appropriate for this piece.good job
Your title caught my eye. Great testimony. Isn't God wonderful?!
05/08/07
Your title caught my eye. Others have noted the small problems, so I won't repeat. We too live in the huricane zone, having sat through many I know the concerns. Our church participated in the relief effort, and are still sending work crews to help in Mississippi and Lourisiana. God Bless your family.
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