The Official Writing Challenge
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05/03/07
This brought back precious memories of my three children who are now grown and have flown the coop! Great!
05/06/07
Clever story, good job of capturing the hectic life of a mom with preschoolers.

The only suggestion I'd have would be to put your prayers and thoughts in italics, to differentiate them further from the dialogue with the little ones.