The Official Writing Challenge
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05/06/07
Interesting analogy--I never thought of it that way!

I felt that the first half of this piece perhaps lacked a bit of focus, but it really began to solidify in the last 4 paragraphs.

Your writing is frank and easy to read--nicely done.
05/09/07
Great analogy - one I'd never considered. Thanks for writing!
05/09/07
I liked your straightforward observations. The ending was a little abrupt, but other than that, I enjoyed your viewpoint.