The Official Writing Challenge
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This was a very insightful, inspiring article. I feel the Holy Spirit even now as I write this critique of your very interesting article.
05/06/07
Lots of really good imagery in this devotional.

Perhaps the longer paragraphs could be broken into somewhat shorter ones, to improve the pace of your piece.

Thank you for sharing this piece from your heart. Very nice.
05/09/07
You captured and put into words the imagery many of us experience. I could feel your heart as it poured out--good job.
05/09/07
Excellent message. I would love to see some concrete examples woven into this along with the beautiful imagery that is already here. I enjoyed this very much.
This is a very good and timely article. There are some punctuation flaws, but the story as a whole is very good.
05/09/07
I definitely felt the intensity of your devotion here. Very heartfelt. Thanks for sharing it