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05/03/07
Great inspirition here. Enjoyed reading this.
05/03/07
I don't get it. How can one lose their soul by serving their country?
I can relate to that Momma and thought it was a well written devotional. Its a blessing to read your story.
05/06/07
Great title and inspiring testimony to the power of a mother's prayers.

I agree that some clarification of the first paragraph might help--it's not going into the military that would cost him his soul, but taking a bullet while still unsaved.

Great ending, with the mother and the Savior both with their arms open wide.
This is a good story. I feel like it would have more life with a little dialogue. But the testimony is a great one. I liked how the mother never gave up.