The Official Writing Challenge
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What a touching story. The writing was very good, very romantic. I could feel her loneliness and love for her husband. Good job.
What a good story. Keep writing -- I had feeling early on that he was in the military. God Bless,

Jeanette
04/30/07
What a bittersweet story. Her sadness was very well described. You made me see her life clearly. Good job!
04/30/07
Wow--this was very powerfully written. I could feel her heart and I especially powerful was her counting the hours since she'd seen him. Kudos to you!