The Official Writing Challenge
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I don't usually identify with prose like this. But I read this to the end and it is very good. It's hard to believe that this is in level one.
04/30/07
This is well written and I understood it in my heart. I think once you have felt what it is to have promises broken you can fully relate. Thank you for sharing it with us!
04/30/07
Very intense and heartfelt. Your longing and awe are clearly expressed. Keep writing!
04/30/07
Beautifully written. What a nice heartfelt elaboration on the Song of Solomon verse at the end.
05/01/07
You gave me goosebumps, really! Great writing means that the reader can feel what you put into words, and you accomplished that so incredibly well! It's also about being honest about what you feel, and I could feel the love and pain that went into this. Excellent work!
05/02/07
This is absolutely, wonderful! Great entry!
05/02/07
This is beautiful! So deep and honestly written. I really liked the tone and feel of it. A few verses seemed a tad too long, maybe they needed to be two lines instead of one? Just a thought, otherwise, very well done! ^_^
05/02/07
This is beautiful, so vulnerable and lovely. Well done!